Writing about the Titanic.

Sinking Ship

Length

Bronze medal = 3 paragraphs

Silver medal = 4 paragraphs 

Gold medal = 6 paragraphs 

one beautiful day I boarded the Titanic. It was 46,000 tons. It is like triple the times of a train to make 46,000 a train goes upto 3,000 tons to 18,000 tons. Back to the story, I boarded the Titanic. It was humongous.

(1 hour later) i fell asleep (1 hour later) uh i had a good sleep (10 minutes later) im doing big bombs in the pool the spar is nice and hot wow its hot hot hm HMMM HM HMMMMM HM hm hm ha nice and hot.

(2 days later) iceberg iceberg! (calling the upstairs) iceberg! Turn turn ahh! It's gonna hit (KA BOOM!) ah get on the lifeboats go go go. Well that was my story hope you liked it.